Friday 24 July 2015

WALT: create rhyming poems
I have a friend called cam
He has a poem about a clam
I will throw him in the bin
I punched him in the chin
It turned into flame
I like this game
I can bake
I can make a cake
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  1. Anonymous24 July 2015 at 12:27

    I like your post isaac it funny and it rymes

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  2. Anonymous21 March 2016 at 10:56

    Kia ora, Isaac
    I am year 6 from Rm 7, from
    Hay Park School, I really liked that you have put, who was you best friend.

    Also I really liked how you said that you can bake some cake. my favorite thing is to do, is to bake cake like you.

    This is my blog http://hpslanug.blogspot.co.nz

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